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Rick  Batross's avatar

I like it! The last written line is quite quixotic. It brought the entire scene into a metaphysical focus. It threw a sense of deja vu all over me!

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James Ron's avatar

Really enjoyed this.

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Profes50r's avatar

Very well done indeed!

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David Lentz's avatar

This was wonderful

Beautiful

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