Fiction
Wait, what am I missing?
Did Bill become Jim?
No, just a minor memory lapse.
You say that after I spent hours figuring out the plot twist!
Jim is mentioned once, as Susan's husband. I got him confused with Bill. It happens...
I've gone back in and fixed it.
I like Susan, she is right and she doesn't hold back. Old Bill is going to have a hard time untangling this web he made. A timeless cautionary tale. Well done.
Love hurts - so does truth.
Love doesn't hurt, when you do it right!
Wait, what am I missing?
Did Bill become Jim?
No, just a minor memory lapse.
You say that after I spent hours figuring out the plot twist!
Jim is mentioned once, as Susan's husband. I got him confused with Bill. It happens...
I've gone back in and fixed it.
I like Susan, she is right and she doesn't hold back. Old Bill is going to have a hard time untangling this web he made. A timeless cautionary tale. Well done.
Love hurts - so does truth.
Love doesn't hurt, when you do it right!